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Sunday, January 9, 2011

Comparison-Contrast Paragraph

In the last post, we was discussed about comparison-contrast paragraph, and now let's begin to comparison-contrast paragaraph.



this is the example :

Outline

  1. Title  : Ice Cream Versus Frozen Yoghurt
  2. Introduction : Dessert is usually eat when we already done our main course. It can be pudding, shorbet, cake or something else. 
  3. Body Paragraph


  • Topic Sentence : Nowadays,  Ice cream and Frozen yoghurt are one of the most favourite dessert . It’s no wonder because both of them have a delicious taste.
  • Thesis Statement: According those dessert, they have several differences and also the similarities. First, the similarities such as the ingredients and shape. Second is the benefits for our health. First of differences are such as the toping. Second is the taste. Second is the nutritions. 

     4.  Similarities :

  • Ingredients and shape.
  • Benefits for our health.

     5.  Differences :

  • The toping and taste.
  • Nutritions.

     6. Conclusion

  • Ice cream and frozen yoghurt are equally good for consumption. Now frozen yoghurt famous and much liked because many varietis of toping

Comparison-Contrast Paragraph


Ice Cream Versus Frozen Yoghurt

Dessert is usually eat when we already done our main course. It can be pudding, shorbet, cake or something else. Usually the dessert has a good taste and be the last course. Not rarely, the dessert is just only fruits. Currently, many people make a variety of dessert that combine fruit with cake or so on. Nowadays, ice cream and frozen yoghurt are one of the most favourite dessert . It’s no wonder because both of them have a delicious taste. They can melt in mouth when we eat it. According those dessert, they have several differences and also the similarities. First, the similarities such as the ingredients and shape. Second is the benefits for our health. First of differences are such as the toping and taste. Second is the nutritions.
Between of those dessert is have a similarities in ingredients and shape. Ice cream is made from milk and frozen yoghurt is too. They contains fresh milk that make them soft in mouth. But the milk actually not the same because for ice cream is use skim milk but in frozen yoghurt is use milk that already fermented with bactery called lactobacillus. And both of them is frozen. For the shape they looks like the same. Ice cream has soft shape and frozen yoghurt too. Its little bit hard to distinguish them when we not try first because of their appearances. So, to distinguish them we must try it.
The second similarities is about the function for our health. Ice cream and frozen yoghurt has a good benefits. When we eat ice cream or frozen yoghurt, it can relax our mind and our body because they are cold and soft in mouth. Ice cream and frozen yoghurt also contains of calcium that makes our bones strong and also can prevent ostheoporosis. Both of them also not causes flu because when they in the mouth, the temperature in our body help them being melt and when they in throat it becomes not as cold as at the first time. It means that between ice cream and frozen yoghurt is kind of dessert that full of benefits to our body and also have a delicious taste.
Many people loved both of those dessert because has delicious taste and have a benefits to our body. But although they loved by many people, they also have differences in any aspects. First I will explain the differences in toping. For ice cream is use toping like chocolate, strawberry, wafer and etc. Usually ice cream use a sweet toping. So that, ice cream has a sweetest taste than frozen yoghurt. It differs with frozen yoghurt. Usually it use fruits toping, biscuits (if they don’t like sour taste), or also colourfull candy. and the taste of frozen yoghurt is sour and not as sweet as ice cream. So, not rarely for the first time, many people doesn’t like fruits toping because it adds sour taste in frozen yoghurt, they prefer to choose candy toping or biscuits to balancing the taste itself. Now, there are many varieties of frozen yoghurt, not only plain but also frozen yoghurt with another taste like strawberry, mango, blueberry etc.
The last is about the nutritions fact between those. In this case i will explain about the fat in ice cream. According the source in malang-post newspaper, ice cream contains of 10-12% fat and frozen yoghurt is contains about 2-4% fat. It means that consuming frozen yoghurt is healthier than ice cream because contains less fat. Both of them is contain calcium. But in frozen yoghurt is contains higher vitamin than ice cream such as vitamin B complex, folic acid, panththenic acid , and biotin. Frozen yoghurt also contains bacteria lactobacillus that useful for digestion system.
Ice cream and frozen yoghurt are equally good for consumption. Now frozen yoghurt famous and much liked because many varietis of toping. Frozen yoghurt also healthier than ice cream and has many flavour. Frozen yoghurt often founded in major malls in Indonesia with a variety of brands. Now you can easily find outlets that sell frozen yoghurt and can enjoy the atmosphere with your friends.

By : Nurul Mahmudah

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